Plot Hole: Puns aside, Apple Bloom has no issues with an orfice shove with a grown adult but bleeds when something half its size goes the other way.Padding: One sentence in the fic boils down to "we left the house and went back", but is thirty words long, a good portion of the fic's length.Lying Creator: Kphoria has flip-flopped on whether it was always a parody, always serious, turned into one of the two halfway, and whether or not he is actually Kphoria or an imposter.Les Yay Shipping: In-universe, we get Scootaloo/Apple Bloom and Rainbow Dash/Applejack.Also, not liking Les Yay makes you a homophobic homophone. Insane Troll Logic: If you enter a womb backwards, you grow backwards as well.Girl-On-Girl Is Hot: And if you don't think so, you're a homophone, apparently.
Easy Amnesia: Being unbirthed to infancy will do that to you.Drunk on Milk: Applejack and the author get drunk on mouthwash and Nyquil, respectively.Dissimile: " It was like vore except not so shut up Jellote and stop flaming.
Author Tract: The various author's notes give some disturbing insight into the writer's mind.despite not being a pegasus and lacking wings. One case in particular uses a bit of Fanon logic, wherein pegasi can show arousement through wing-boners. It doesn't do the reader much good, either.Anatomically-Impossible Sex: Big Macintosh and some unnamed mare end up banging so hard that he gets unbirthed, which clearly mentally scars Apple Bloom.And Now for Something Completely Different: One "chapter" is narrated by Applejack.A Date with Rosie Palms: Apple Bloom begins tickling her beav- because it felt ticklish.Tropes used in Ten Pounds of Fetus and Mouthwash include: If this story is a troll fic, it certainly does its job well, but if not, weep for humanity.Ī reproduction of the story, with minimal changes, can be found here, but don't waste your time. While it would be easy to assume that the story was intended to be bad, the author is allegedly Kphoria, a known author who does have every fetish mentioned in the story. Much like The Spiderses, the story drags out that single paragraph over several pages, and manages to fit in every mean-spirited line it can. The story ends with Apple Bloom, now the surrogate mother of her older sister, deciding to do the same with Big Macintosh. Then Apple Bloom starts narrating again and she and the Cutie Mark Crusaders decide that they want to unbirth her. Suddenly, Applejack takes control of the narrative and we cut to her making out with Rainbow Dash. Apple Bloom, or rather Appleblume, introduces herself and, for the most part, everything starts off simple, until she casually mentions her Unbirth Fetish. More importantly, though, is the fact that no one is certain whether or not it is actually a Troll Fic to begin with. Firstly, the spelling, grammar, coherence and general story are awful. Faust intended to use more characters from the first My Little Pony series, but Hasbro did not maintain the trademarks to nearly all of the original character names and most names had to be replaced.And Unnamed My Little Pony Fanfic, more commonly known as Ten Pounds of Fetus and Mouthwash, is a My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic Troll Fic in the style of My Immortal in two ways.Lauren Faust, the show's developer, was inspired to create Applejack by her childhood toy G1 pony Applejack. Applejack is one of the only two members of the main cast who were part of the original My Little Pony cast in the 1980s animated series, the other member being Spike.On the contrary, although being the Element of Honesty, she is shown to lie most of the time, like in The Last Roundup when she avoids telling the truth about why she didn't come back to Ponyville.Sometimes she can be to brutally honest, like in Rarity Takes Manehatten when she says Rarity was "pretty rotten", acting proud of what she said after.She holds quite a distasteful dislike to anything to do with fashion.
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